refactor(skills): move copy-editing catalogs to references
Keep the decision steps in SKILL.md and move catalogs, examples, and checklists verbatim to references/ to reduce the context cost of loading the skill. Co-Authored-By: Claude Opus 5.5 <noreply@anthropic.com>
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@@ -28,231 +28,7 @@ Good copy editing isn't about rewriting—it's about enhancing. Each pass focuse
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Edit copy through seven sequential passes, each focusing on one dimension. After each sweep, loop back to check previous sweeps aren't compromised.
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### Sweep 1: Clarity
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**Focus:** Can the reader understand what you're saying?
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**What to check:**
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- Confusing sentence structures
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- Unclear pronoun references
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- Jargon or insider language
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- Ambiguous statements
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- Missing context
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**Common clarity killers:**
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- Sentences trying to say too much
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- Abstract language instead of concrete
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- Assuming reader knowledge they don't have
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- Burying the point in qualifications
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**Process:**
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1. Read through quickly, highlighting unclear parts
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2. Don't correct yet—just note problem areas
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3. After marking issues, recommend specific edits
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4. Verify edits maintain the original intent
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**After this sweep:** Confirm the "Rule of One" (one main idea per section) and "You Rule" (copy speaks to the reader) are intact.
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---
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### Sweep 2: Voice and Tone
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**Focus:** Is the copy consistent in how it sounds?
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**What to check:**
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- Shifts between formal and casual
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- Inconsistent brand personality
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- Mood changes that feel jarring
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- Word choices that don't match the brand
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**Common voice issues:**
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- Starting casual, becoming corporate
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- Mixing "we" and "the company" references
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- Humor in some places, serious in others (unintentionally)
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- Technical language appearing randomly
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**Process:**
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1. Read aloud to hear inconsistencies
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2. Mark where tone shifts unexpectedly
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3. Recommend edits that smooth transitions
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4. Ensure personality remains throughout
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**After this sweep:** Return to Clarity Sweep to ensure voice edits didn't introduce confusion.
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---
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### Sweep 3: So What
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**Focus:** Does every claim answer "why should I care?"
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**What to check:**
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- Features without benefits
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- Claims without consequences
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- Statements that don't connect to reader's life
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- Missing "which means..." bridges
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**The So What test:**
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For every statement, ask "Okay, so what?" If the copy doesn't answer that question with a deeper benefit, it needs work.
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❌ "Our platform uses AI-powered analytics"
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*So what?*
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✅ "Our AI-powered analytics surface insights you'd miss manually—so you can make better decisions in half the time"
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**Common So What failures:**
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- Feature lists without benefit connections
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- Impressive-sounding claims that don't land
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- Technical capabilities without outcomes
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- Company achievements that don't help the reader
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**Process:**
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1. Read each claim and literally ask "so what?"
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2. Highlight claims missing the answer
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3. Add the benefit bridge or deeper meaning
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4. Ensure benefits connect to real reader desires
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**After this sweep:** Return to Voice and Tone, then Clarity.
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---
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### Sweep 4: Prove It
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**Focus:** Is every claim supported with evidence?
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**What to check:**
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- Unsubstantiated claims
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- Missing social proof
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- Assertions without backup
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- "Best" or "leading" without evidence
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**Types of proof to look for:**
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- Testimonials with names and specifics
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- Case study references
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- Statistics and data
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- Third-party validation
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- Guarantees and risk reversals
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- Customer logos
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- Review scores
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**Common proof gaps:**
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- "Trusted by thousands" (which thousands?)
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- "Industry-leading" (according to whom?)
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- "Customers love us" (show them saying it)
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- Results claims without specifics
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**Process:**
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1. Identify every claim that needs proof
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2. Check if proof exists nearby
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3. Flag unsupported assertions
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4. Recommend adding proof or softening claims
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**After this sweep:** Return to So What, Voice and Tone, then Clarity.
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---
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### Sweep 5: Specificity
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**Focus:** Is the copy concrete enough to be compelling?
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**What to check:**
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- Vague language ("improve," "enhance," "optimize")
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- Generic statements that could apply to anyone
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- Round numbers that feel made up
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- Missing details that would make it real
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**Specificity upgrades:**
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| Vague | Specific |
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|-------|----------|
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| Save time | Save 4 hours every week |
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| Many customers | 2,847 teams |
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| Fast results | Results in 14 days |
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| Improve your workflow | Cut your reporting time in half |
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| Great support | Response within 2 hours |
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**Common specificity issues:**
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- Adjectives doing the work nouns should do
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- Benefits without quantification
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- Outcomes without timeframes
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- Claims without concrete examples
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**Process:**
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1. Highlight vague words and phrases
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2. Ask "Can this be more specific?"
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3. Add numbers, timeframes, or examples
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4. Remove content that can't be made specific (it's probably filler)
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**After this sweep:** Return to Prove It, So What, Voice and Tone, then Clarity.
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---
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### Sweep 6: Heightened Emotion
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**Focus:** Does the copy make the reader feel something?
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**What to check:**
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- Flat, informational language
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- Missing emotional triggers
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- Pain points mentioned but not felt
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- Aspirations stated but not evoked
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**Emotional dimensions to consider:**
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- Pain of the current state
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- Frustration with alternatives
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- Fear of missing out
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- Desire for transformation
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- Pride in making smart choices
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- Relief from solving the problem
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**Techniques for heightening emotion:**
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- Paint the "before" state vividly
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- Use sensory language
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- Tell micro-stories
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- Reference shared experiences
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- Ask questions that prompt reflection
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**Process:**
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1. Read for emotional impact—does it move you?
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2. Identify flat sections that should resonate
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3. Add emotional texture while staying authentic
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4. Ensure emotion serves the message (not manipulation)
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**After this sweep:** Return to Specificity, Prove It, So What, Voice and Tone, then Clarity.
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---
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### Sweep 7: Zero Risk
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**Focus:** Have we removed every barrier to action?
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**What to check:**
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- Friction near CTAs
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- Unanswered objections
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- Missing trust signals
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- Unclear next steps
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- Hidden costs or surprises
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**Risk reducers to look for:**
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- Money-back guarantees
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- Free trials
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- "No credit card required"
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- "Cancel anytime"
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- Social proof near CTA
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- Clear expectations of what happens next
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- Privacy assurances
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**Common risk issues:**
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- CTA asks for commitment without earning trust
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- Objections raised but not addressed
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- Fine print that creates doubt
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- Vague "Contact us" instead of clear next step
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**Process:**
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1. Focus on sections near CTAs
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2. List every reason someone might hesitate
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3. Check if the copy addresses each concern
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4. Add risk reversals or trust signals as needed
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**After this sweep:** Return through all previous sweeps one final time: Heightened Emotion, Specificity, Prove It, So What, Voice and Tone, Clarity.
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Read [references/seven-sweeps.md](references/seven-sweeps.md) for the focus, checks, process, and loop-back of each sweep: Clarity, Voice and Tone, So What, Prove It, Specificity, Heightened Emotion, Zero Risk.
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Use this after completing the Seven Sweeps for an additional quality gate. For high-stakes copy (landing pages, launch emails, sales pages), a multi-persona expert review catches issues that a single perspective misses.
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### How It Works
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1. **Assemble 3-5 expert personas** relevant to the copy type
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2. **Each persona scores the copy 1-10** on their area of expertise
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3. **Collect specific critiques** — not just scores, but what to fix
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4. **Revise based on feedback** — address the lowest-scoring areas first
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5. **Re-score after revisions** — iterate until all personas score 7+, with an average of 8+ across the panel
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### Recommended Expert Panels
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**Landing page copy:**
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- Conversion copywriter (clarity, CTA strength, benefit hierarchy)
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- UX writer (scannability, cognitive load, user flow)
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- Target customer persona (does this speak to me? do I trust it?)
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- Brand strategist (voice consistency, positioning accuracy)
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**Email sequence:**
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- Email marketing specialist (subject lines, open/click optimization)
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- Copywriter (hooks, storytelling, persuasion)
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- Spam filter analyst (deliverability red flags, trigger words)
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- Target customer persona (relevance, value, unsubscribe risk)
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**Sales page / long-form:**
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- Direct response copywriter (offer structure, objection handling, urgency)
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- Skeptical buyer persona (proof gaps, trust issues, red flags)
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- Editor (flow, readability, conciseness)
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- SEO specialist (keyword coverage, search intent alignment)
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### Scoring Rubric
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| Score | Meaning |
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| 9-10 | Publish-ready. No meaningful improvements. |
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| 7-8 | Strong. Minor tweaks only. |
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| 5-6 | Functional but has clear gaps. Needs another pass. |
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| 3-4 | Significant issues. Major revision needed. |
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| 1-2 | Fundamentally broken. Rethink approach. |
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### When to Use
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- **Always** for launch copy, pricing pages, and high-traffic landing pages
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- **Recommended** for email sequences, sales pages, and ad copy
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- **Optional** for blog posts, social content, and internal docs
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- **Skip** for quick updates, minor edits, and low-stakes content
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Read [references/expert-panel-scoring.md](references/expert-panel-scoring.md) for how it works, recommended panels, the scoring rubric, and when to use it.
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Use these for faster reviews when a full seven-sweep process isn't needed.
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### Word-Level Checks
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**Cut these words:**
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- Very, really, extremely, incredibly (weak intensifiers)
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- Just, actually, basically (filler)
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- In order to (use "to")
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- That (often unnecessary)
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- Things, stuff (vague)
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**Replace these:**
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| Weak | Strong |
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|------|--------|
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| Utilize | Use |
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| Implement | Set up |
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| Leverage | Use |
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| Facilitate | Help |
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| Innovative | New |
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| Robust | Strong |
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| Seamless | Smooth |
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| Cutting-edge | New/Modern |
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**Watch for:**
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- Adverbs (usually unnecessary)
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- Passive voice (switch to active)
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- Nominalizations (verb → noun: "make a decision" → "decide")
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### Sentence-Level Checks
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- One idea per sentence
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- Vary sentence length (mix short and long)
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- Front-load important information
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- Max 3 conjunctions per sentence
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- No more than 25 words (usually)
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### Paragraph-Level Checks
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- One topic per paragraph
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- Short paragraphs (2-4 sentences for web)
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- Strong opening sentences
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- Logical flow between paragraphs
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- White space for scannability
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Read [references/quick-pass-checks.md](references/quick-pass-checks.md) for word-, sentence-, and paragraph-level checks.
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## Common Copy Problems & Fixes
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### Problem: Wall of Features
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**Symptom:** List of what the product does without why it matters
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**Fix:** Add "which means..." after each feature to bridge to benefits
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### Problem: Corporate Speak
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**Symptom:** "Leverage synergies to optimize outcomes"
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**Fix:** Ask "How would a human say this?" and use those words
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### Problem: Weak Opening
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**Symptom:** Starting with company history or vague statements
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**Fix:** Lead with the reader's problem or desired outcome
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### Problem: Buried CTA
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**Symptom:** The ask comes after too much buildup, or isn't clear
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**Fix:** Make the CTA obvious, early, and repeated
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### Problem: No Proof
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**Symptom:** "Customers love us" with no evidence
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**Fix:** Add specific testimonials, numbers, or case references
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### Problem: Generic Claims
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**Symptom:** "We help businesses grow"
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**Fix:** Specify who, how, and by how much
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### Problem: Mixed Audiences
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**Symptom:** Copy tries to speak to everyone, resonates with no one
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**Fix:** Pick one audience and write directly to them
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### Problem: Feature Overload
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**Symptom:** Listing every capability, overwhelming the reader
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**Fix:** Focus on 3-5 key benefits that matter most to the audience
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Read [references/common-copy-problems.md](references/common-copy-problems.md) for symptoms and fixes of frequent copy problems (wall of features, corporate speak, weak opening, buried CTA, and more).
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## Working with Copy Sweeps
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When editing collaboratively:
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1. **Run a sweep and present findings** - Show what you found, why it's an issue
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2. **Recommend specific edits** - Don't just identify problems; propose solutions
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3. **Request the updated copy** - Let the author make final decisions
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4. **Verify previous sweeps** - After each round of edits, re-check earlier sweeps
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5. **Repeat until clean** - Continue until a full sweep finds no new issues
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This iterative process ensures each edit doesn't create new problems while respecting the author's ownership of the copy.
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When editing collaboratively, follow the iterative sweep loop in [references/seven-sweeps.md](references/seven-sweeps.md).
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# Common Copy Problems & Fixes
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## Problem: Wall of Features
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**Symptom:** List of what the product does without why it matters
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**Fix:** Add "which means..." after each feature to bridge to benefits
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## Problem: Corporate Speak
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**Symptom:** "Leverage synergies to optimize outcomes"
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**Fix:** Ask "How would a human say this?" and use those words
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## Problem: Weak Opening
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**Symptom:** Starting with company history or vague statements
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**Fix:** Lead with the reader's problem or desired outcome
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## Problem: Buried CTA
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**Symptom:** The ask comes after too much buildup, or isn't clear
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**Fix:** Make the CTA obvious, early, and repeated
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## Problem: No Proof
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**Symptom:** "Customers love us" with no evidence
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**Fix:** Add specific testimonials, numbers, or case references
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## Problem: Generic Claims
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**Symptom:** "We help businesses grow"
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**Fix:** Specify who, how, and by how much
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## Problem: Mixed Audiences
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**Symptom:** Copy tries to speak to everyone, resonates with no one
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**Fix:** Pick one audience and write directly to them
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## Problem: Feature Overload
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**Symptom:** Listing every capability, overwhelming the reader
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**Fix:** Focus on 3-5 key benefits that matter most to the audience
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# Expert Panel Scoring
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## How It Works
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1. **Assemble 3-5 expert personas** relevant to the copy type
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2. **Each persona scores the copy 1-10** on their area of expertise
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3. **Collect specific critiques** — not just scores, but what to fix
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4. **Revise based on feedback** — address the lowest-scoring areas first
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5. **Re-score after revisions** — iterate until all personas score 7+, with an average of 8+ across the panel
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## Recommended Expert Panels
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**Landing page copy:**
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- Conversion copywriter (clarity, CTA strength, benefit hierarchy)
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- UX writer (scannability, cognitive load, user flow)
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- Target customer persona (does this speak to me? do I trust it?)
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- Brand strategist (voice consistency, positioning accuracy)
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**Email sequence:**
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- Email marketing specialist (subject lines, open/click optimization)
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- Copywriter (hooks, storytelling, persuasion)
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- Spam filter analyst (deliverability red flags, trigger words)
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- Target customer persona (relevance, value, unsubscribe risk)
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**Sales page / long-form:**
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- Direct response copywriter (offer structure, objection handling, urgency)
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- Skeptical buyer persona (proof gaps, trust issues, red flags)
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- Editor (flow, readability, conciseness)
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- SEO specialist (keyword coverage, search intent alignment)
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## Scoring Rubric
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| Score | Meaning |
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|-------|---------|
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| 9-10 | Publish-ready. No meaningful improvements. |
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| 7-8 | Strong. Minor tweaks only. |
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| 5-6 | Functional but has clear gaps. Needs another pass. |
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| 3-4 | Significant issues. Major revision needed. |
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| 1-2 | Fundamentally broken. Rethink approach. |
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## When to Use
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- **Always** for launch copy, pricing pages, and high-traffic landing pages
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- **Recommended** for email sequences, sales pages, and ad copy
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- **Optional** for blog posts, social content, and internal docs
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- **Skip** for quick updates, minor edits, and low-stakes content
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# Quick-Pass Editing Checks
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## Word-Level Checks
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**Cut these words:**
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- Very, really, extremely, incredibly (weak intensifiers)
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- Just, actually, basically (filler)
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- In order to (use "to")
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- That (often unnecessary)
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- Things, stuff (vague)
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**Replace these:**
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| Weak | Strong |
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|------|--------|
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| Utilize | Use |
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| Implement | Set up |
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| Leverage | Use |
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| Facilitate | Help |
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| Innovative | New |
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| Robust | Strong |
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| Seamless | Smooth |
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| Cutting-edge | New/Modern |
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**Watch for:**
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- Adverbs (usually unnecessary)
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- Passive voice (switch to active)
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- Nominalizations (verb → noun: "make a decision" → "decide")
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## Sentence-Level Checks
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- One idea per sentence
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- Vary sentence length (mix short and long)
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- Front-load important information
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- Max 3 conjunctions per sentence
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- No more than 25 words (usually)
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## Paragraph-Level Checks
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- One topic per paragraph
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- Short paragraphs (2-4 sentences for web)
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- Strong opening sentences
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- Logical flow between paragraphs
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- White space for scannability
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# The Seven Sweeps Framework
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## Sweep 1: Clarity
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**Focus:** Can the reader understand what you're saying?
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**What to check:**
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- Confusing sentence structures
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- Unclear pronoun references
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- Jargon or insider language
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- Ambiguous statements
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- Missing context
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**Common clarity killers:**
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- Sentences trying to say too much
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- Abstract language instead of concrete
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- Assuming reader knowledge they don't have
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- Burying the point in qualifications
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**Process:**
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1. Read through quickly, highlighting unclear parts
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2. Don't correct yet—just note problem areas
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3. After marking issues, recommend specific edits
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4. Verify edits maintain the original intent
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**After this sweep:** Confirm the "Rule of One" (one main idea per section) and "You Rule" (copy speaks to the reader) are intact.
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---
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## Sweep 2: Voice and Tone
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**Focus:** Is the copy consistent in how it sounds?
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**What to check:**
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- Shifts between formal and casual
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- Inconsistent brand personality
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- Mood changes that feel jarring
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- Word choices that don't match the brand
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**Common voice issues:**
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- Starting casual, becoming corporate
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- Mixing "we" and "the company" references
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- Humor in some places, serious in others (unintentionally)
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- Technical language appearing randomly
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**Process:**
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1. Read aloud to hear inconsistencies
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2. Mark where tone shifts unexpectedly
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3. Recommend edits that smooth transitions
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4. Ensure personality remains throughout
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**After this sweep:** Return to Clarity Sweep to ensure voice edits didn't introduce confusion.
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---
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## Sweep 3: So What
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**Focus:** Does every claim answer "why should I care?"
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**What to check:**
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- Features without benefits
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- Claims without consequences
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- Statements that don't connect to reader's life
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- Missing "which means..." bridges
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**The So What test:**
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For every statement, ask "Okay, so what?" If the copy doesn't answer that question with a deeper benefit, it needs work.
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❌ "Our platform uses AI-powered analytics"
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*So what?*
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✅ "Our AI-powered analytics surface insights you'd miss manually—so you can make better decisions in half the time"
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**Common So What failures:**
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- Feature lists without benefit connections
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- Impressive-sounding claims that don't land
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- Technical capabilities without outcomes
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- Company achievements that don't help the reader
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**Process:**
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1. Read each claim and literally ask "so what?"
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2. Highlight claims missing the answer
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3. Add the benefit bridge or deeper meaning
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4. Ensure benefits connect to real reader desires
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**After this sweep:** Return to Voice and Tone, then Clarity.
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---
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## Sweep 4: Prove It
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**Focus:** Is every claim supported with evidence?
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**What to check:**
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- Unsubstantiated claims
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- Missing social proof
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- Assertions without backup
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- "Best" or "leading" without evidence
|
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|
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**Types of proof to look for:**
|
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- Testimonials with names and specifics
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- Case study references
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- Statistics and data
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- Third-party validation
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- Guarantees and risk reversals
|
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- Customer logos
|
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- Review scores
|
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|
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**Common proof gaps:**
|
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- "Trusted by thousands" (which thousands?)
|
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- "Industry-leading" (according to whom?)
|
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- "Customers love us" (show them saying it)
|
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- Results claims without specifics
|
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|
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**Process:**
|
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1. Identify every claim that needs proof
|
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2. Check if proof exists nearby
|
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3. Flag unsupported assertions
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4. Recommend adding proof or softening claims
|
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|
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**After this sweep:** Return to So What, Voice and Tone, then Clarity.
|
||||
|
||||
---
|
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|
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## Sweep 5: Specificity
|
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|
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**Focus:** Is the copy concrete enough to be compelling?
|
||||
|
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**What to check:**
|
||||
- Vague language ("improve," "enhance," "optimize")
|
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- Generic statements that could apply to anyone
|
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- Round numbers that feel made up
|
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- Missing details that would make it real
|
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|
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**Specificity upgrades:**
|
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|
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| Vague | Specific |
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|-------|----------|
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||||
| Save time | Save 4 hours every week |
|
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| Many customers | 2,847 teams |
|
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| Fast results | Results in 14 days |
|
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| Improve your workflow | Cut your reporting time in half |
|
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| Great support | Response within 2 hours |
|
||||
|
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**Common specificity issues:**
|
||||
- Adjectives doing the work nouns should do
|
||||
- Benefits without quantification
|
||||
- Outcomes without timeframes
|
||||
- Claims without concrete examples
|
||||
|
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**Process:**
|
||||
1. Highlight vague words and phrases
|
||||
2. Ask "Can this be more specific?"
|
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3. Add numbers, timeframes, or examples
|
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4. Remove content that can't be made specific (it's probably filler)
|
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|
||||
**After this sweep:** Return to Prove It, So What, Voice and Tone, then Clarity.
|
||||
|
||||
---
|
||||
|
||||
## Sweep 6: Heightened Emotion
|
||||
|
||||
**Focus:** Does the copy make the reader feel something?
|
||||
|
||||
**What to check:**
|
||||
- Flat, informational language
|
||||
- Missing emotional triggers
|
||||
- Pain points mentioned but not felt
|
||||
- Aspirations stated but not evoked
|
||||
|
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**Emotional dimensions to consider:**
|
||||
- Pain of the current state
|
||||
- Frustration with alternatives
|
||||
- Fear of missing out
|
||||
- Desire for transformation
|
||||
- Pride in making smart choices
|
||||
- Relief from solving the problem
|
||||
|
||||
**Techniques for heightening emotion:**
|
||||
- Paint the "before" state vividly
|
||||
- Use sensory language
|
||||
- Tell micro-stories
|
||||
- Reference shared experiences
|
||||
- Ask questions that prompt reflection
|
||||
|
||||
**Process:**
|
||||
1. Read for emotional impact—does it move you?
|
||||
2. Identify flat sections that should resonate
|
||||
3. Add emotional texture while staying authentic
|
||||
4. Ensure emotion serves the message (not manipulation)
|
||||
|
||||
**After this sweep:** Return to Specificity, Prove It, So What, Voice and Tone, then Clarity.
|
||||
|
||||
---
|
||||
|
||||
## Sweep 7: Zero Risk
|
||||
|
||||
**Focus:** Have we removed every barrier to action?
|
||||
|
||||
**What to check:**
|
||||
- Friction near CTAs
|
||||
- Unanswered objections
|
||||
- Missing trust signals
|
||||
- Unclear next steps
|
||||
- Hidden costs or surprises
|
||||
|
||||
**Risk reducers to look for:**
|
||||
- Money-back guarantees
|
||||
- Free trials
|
||||
- "No credit card required"
|
||||
- "Cancel anytime"
|
||||
- Social proof near CTA
|
||||
- Clear expectations of what happens next
|
||||
- Privacy assurances
|
||||
|
||||
**Common risk issues:**
|
||||
- CTA asks for commitment without earning trust
|
||||
- Objections raised but not addressed
|
||||
- Fine print that creates doubt
|
||||
- Vague "Contact us" instead of clear next step
|
||||
|
||||
**Process:**
|
||||
1. Focus on sections near CTAs
|
||||
2. List every reason someone might hesitate
|
||||
3. Check if the copy addresses each concern
|
||||
4. Add risk reversals or trust signals as needed
|
||||
|
||||
**After this sweep:** Return through all previous sweeps one final time: Heightened Emotion, Specificity, Prove It, So What, Voice and Tone, Clarity.
|
||||
|
||||
---
|
||||
# Working with Copy Sweeps
|
||||
|
||||
When editing collaboratively:
|
||||
|
||||
1. **Run a sweep and present findings** - Show what you found, why it's an issue
|
||||
2. **Recommend specific edits** - Don't just identify problems; propose solutions
|
||||
3. **Request the updated copy** - Let the author make final decisions
|
||||
4. **Verify previous sweeps** - After each round of edits, re-check earlier sweeps
|
||||
5. **Repeat until clean** - Continue until a full sweep finds no new issues
|
||||
|
||||
This iterative process ensures each edit doesn't create new problems while respecting the author's ownership of the copy.
|
||||
Reference in new issue
Block a user