improve: text and design for the imprint

src/languages/en.ts

@@ -48,35 +48,35 @@ export const enLanguage: LanguagePack = {
     legalEyebrow: 'Legal',
     title: 'Imprint & Privacy',
     intro:
-      'Legal information for this website under Austrian law, including privacy information for websites operated by {{firstname}} {{lastname}} (Lechner Systems).',
+      'Legal information under Austrian law and privacy information under the GDPR for this website operated by {{firstname}} {{lastname}}, trading as Lechner Systems.',
     backToPortfolio: 'Back to portfolio',
     provider: 'Provider',
     directContact: 'Direct Contact',
     phone: 'Phone',
-    contact: 'Contact',
-    abuse: 'Abuse',
+    contact: 'Email',
+    abuse: 'Abuse Email',
     scopeEyebrow: 'Scope',
     scopeTitle: 'Scope Of These Notices',
     scopeLeft:
-      'These notices apply to this website and, unless a more specific notice is published there, to other websites operated by Julian Lechner under the name Lechner Systems.',
+      'These notices apply to this portfolio website and to content made available directly through this domain. Linked third-party websites are subject to the notices of their respective operators.',
     scopeRight:
-      'This website provides information about projects, technical services, contact options, and professional work in software engineering, IT, and related digital services.',
+      'The website presents projects, technical services, and contact options in the field of software engineering, IT, and digital systems. No contract is concluded automatically through this website.',
     privacyEyebrow: 'Privacy',
     privacyTitle: 'Privacy And Data Processing',
     privacyLeftParagraphs: [
-      'The controller for data processing within the meaning of the GDPR is {{firstname}} {{lastname}}, reachable at {{contactMail}} and by phone at {{contactPhone}}.',
-      'As currently implemented in this web project, this website does not use its own tracking, analytics cookies, marketing cookies, or long-term personal usage profiling.',
-      'For informational website access, technically necessary connection and server data may be processed for operation, IT security, abuse prevention, and troubleshooting.',
+      'The controller for data processing within the meaning of the General Data Protection Regulation (GDPR) is {{firstname}} {{lastname}}, reachable at {{contactMail}} and by phone at {{contactPhone}}.',
+      'As currently implemented, this website does not use its own tracking, analytics cookies, marketing cookies, or long-term personal usage profiling.',
+      'When the website is accessed, technically necessary server and connection data may be processed, especially IP address, access date and time, requested resource, transferred data volume, browser and operating system information, and referrer where this data is transmitted by the browser.',
     ],
     privacyRightParagraphs: [
-      'If you contact me by email or phone, the data you provide is processed to handle your request and maintain communication.',
-      'Personal data is disclosed only where legally required, needed for legal claims, or explicitly initiated by you.',
-      'Data is stored only as long as required for communication, request handling, and legal retention duties.',
+      'Processing takes place to provide the website, maintain technical stability and security, prevent abuse, analyze errors, and handle contact requests. The legal bases include Art. 6(1)(f) GDPR and, for pre-contractual communication, Art. 6(1)(b) GDPR.',
+      'If you contact me by email or phone, the information you provide is processed to handle your request and continue communication. Personal data is disclosed only where legally required, needed for legal claims, or initiated by you.',
+      'Personal data is stored only as long as necessary for the stated purposes, statutory retention duties, or the establishment, exercise, or defense of legal claims.',
     ],
     rightsEyebrow: 'Rights',
     rightsTitle: 'Data Subject Rights And Complaints',
     rightsLeft:
-      'Subject to statutory requirements, data subjects have the right of access, rectification, erasure, restriction of processing, data portability, and objection.',
+      'Subject to statutory requirements, data subjects have rights of access, rectification, erasure, restriction of processing, data portability, and objection. Where processing is based on consent, that consent may be withdrawn at any time with effect for the future.',
     rightsRight:
       'Complaints can be submitted to the Austrian Data Protection Authority: Barichgasse 40-42, 1030 Vienna, email dsb@dsb.gv.at, website dsb.gv.at.',
     copyrightEyebrow: 'Copyright',
@@ -86,7 +86,7 @@ export const enLanguage: LanguagePack = {
       'Any use beyond statutory exceptions requires prior written consent of the respective rights holder.',
     ],
     copyrightRightParagraphs: [
-      'This website may contain links to third-party websites. Their operators are solely responsible for those contents.',
+      'This website may contain links to third-party websites. Their operators are solely responsible for their contents, privacy practices, and technical security.',
       'Austrian law applies exclusively, unless mandatory consumer protection provisions require otherwise.',
     ],
   },